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Re: In the shadow of a star Chapter 3
well when he is trying to push the cart can his face really turn a shade of violet in the burning heat? wouldnt it turn a sweltering red instead? If ...
Aug 1, 2008 -
Re: What is love?
First I'll be critical and just revising it for detail: -Watch your punctuation on line 6: no apostrophe on others. I liked how you transitioned from the topic of power ...
Jun 26, 2008 -
Re: My problem with poetry
Two reasons why i like it. 1) It is not too long and easy to read. 2) It relates to something that many writers can understand and empathise with. Some ...
Jun 9, 2008